第5讲 概要写作 高频句型-2022年高考英语新题型(概要写作+读后续写)点拨

第五讲 高频句型

一．分类高频句型

一）表现象的句型： 1)…很普遍

…is common in our daily life/school life.

2 ）…发生在我们的日常生活中 ... occurs in our daily life. 3 ）…被普遍接受

... is widely accepted.

二）表原因的句型1)…的原因是

The reason why people … is that…

2 ）一些原因可以解释它

Some reasons are likely to account for it.The reasons are as follows. ...for the following reasons.

3 ）...导致...

…lead to /result in/ account for/ contribute to……bring about...

三）解决方法

1 ）一个摆脱 …的有效方法是

One effective way to get rid of … is that /+名词/by doing...

The solution to the problem is that...

四）建议

1 ）科学家强烈推荐 …

Scientists strongly recommend that ... 2 ）建议做... It is advisable to do…

It is suggested that we should do...从句的谓语动词用虚拟语气，即(should )+do.

五）影响

1 ）A 在 B 中发挥至关重要的角色 A plays a vital role in B ... 2 ）A 对 B 有很大的影响

A has a tremendous influence on B ,which …

A makes a life-changing difference to B

六）观点陈述

1 ）科学家认为 A 是浪费时间/精力/金钱

Scientists consider A as a waste oftime /energy/money... 2 ）一些人支持 A,然而其他人却反对它

Some people welcome A while others disapprove of it... 3 ）研究表明

Studies show/have found that...

七）利弊

1 ）比较起 A 来， B 有更多优点，它将会使我们在以下的四个方面获益

Compared with A, B have more advantages, which will benefit … in four ways. Different from some people’s views, the writer believes...

八）好处

1 ）A 从 B 中获益很多 A benefits a lot from B in... 2 ）A 对 B 有很多益处 A is beneficial to B in... A is of great benefit to B in... A can benefit B in... Doing A is good for B in...

九）重要性 1)A 在 B 中发挥重要作用

A plays a vital/significant/important role/part in B ... 2)A 对 B 有很大的影响

In our daily life,..., which has a great influence on .... 3)...被看重

It’s of great importance to ... ... is of vital importance in .....

People should pay more attention to /attach more importance to... More attention should be paid to/more importance should be attached to...

Nowadays, we regard..., which..., as the fifth vital to ...and make greater efforts to ....

besides..., .... should also be focused.

However, it is our choices that can make a difference. It’s vital for ... to....

十）结论In brief,.....

十一）衔接词

1.开场： recently,/ in recent days, nowadays, as we all know,

2.层次： firstly/to begin with..., secondly/besides/what’s more/in addition/more importantly..., thirdly/ finally/last

but not least... ，

on the one hand, on the other hand （适用于两点的并列情况）

for one thing, for another thing （适用于两点的对立情况） 3.转折： but, however, yet...

4.并列： and, not only...but also, as well as...

5.因果： so, therefore, thus... 6.对比： while, instead of... 7.让步： although, while, even if... 8.事实： in fact, actually,

9.包括： including, apart from, besides, in addition to...

10.丼例： such as, like...

11.因为： thanks to ，because of, owing to... 12.总结： in brief/in short, all in all,

二．小试牛刀（句型练习）

1.因此，尝试美白产品很普遍。

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_________________ 2.沉默可能发生在谈话中。 ______________________________________________________________________________________

_________________ 3.父母和子女之间交流困难有不同的原因。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.糖对我们的身体有用，但是过多的糖会危害我们的健康，可能会导致健康问题。

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 吸引顾客注意力的一个有效方法是：科学地使用色彩。

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6. 问题的唯一解决途径好像只有靠你自己集中注意力——不管环境多么喧闹。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.医生建议人们不要冒健康的风险，而是要爱并且接受他们的自然肤色。

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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8.建议学校立刻安装这种设备。

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 学校欺凌有很大的不良影响。

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10.拖延症（ procrastination ）严重影响着我们的财富和健康。

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__________________ 11.他们认为体罚无害且有效。 ______________________________________________________________________________________

_________________ 12.新研究表明他们之间有着相互依靠的关系。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13. 相比之下，纸巾，手动烘干机有着更多的优势，这将在四个方面让学校受益。

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_________________ 14.尽管外在美可以快速、轻松地注意到，但是内在美更重要。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15.实验表明西柚汁有助于减肥。

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16.风力是环境友好的，划算的，有利于农村经济，可以创造很多就

业机会。

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17.“父亲生活”在孩子的成绩进步中起着重要的作用。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________

18.但是除了成功之外，失败也应受到重视。

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三．写作框架

1) It's said that, which (要点一) However, some have it that _________ (要点二) All in all, it still has along way to go before ____________________(要点三)

2) People now have complex feelings about______________(要点一) . As a saying goes, every coin has its two sides. For onething,_____________,(要点二) for another, there are so many problem, such as_______________(要点三) Despite of these, __________________(要点四)

3) __________________has some challenges as well as many advantages. (要点一) It’s beneficial to_____________

and ____________________（要点二） However, it faces many challenges, ___________________（要点三）Besides, _____________________（要点四）

4) Scientists accidentally found that while studying____________(要点一). (要点二) However ______________ (要点三) nevertheless, the reasons are still mysterious._____________(要点四) .

5) has advantages but it also has its disadvantages. ____________(要点一) One advantage is that

( 要 点 二 ) Besides, ( 要 点 三 ) But not everyone can get benefits

from ,so _____________________ (要点四)

四．课后练习

练习 1

In schools and at home, most of us have been scolded or even got punished for daydreaming. The majority of

people say that by daydreaming we waste our time and energy in something that is nothing less than unproductive

things. But many medical studies have showed something different. They’ve stressed on the fact that daydreaming

works wonders on our imagination power, creativity and situation-handling technique. In fact, many problems can

be easily solved if we daydream.

The topmost benefit of daydreaming is that your mood gets the right improvement. By separating yourself from

the world around you, you tend to enjoy the aloneness in your mind and get peace from daydreaming as you think

about something that calms your senses. When you start imagining things while daydreaming, you tend to forget all

the stress and tension. Instead, you get happiness from it and this happiness changes into a source of energy that

helps you in working in a good mood.

Many psychologists have said that people who daydream tend to have a sharper memory. It’s true that when

you’re daydreaming, you tend to get carried away to imagining various situations, either real or unreal. You tend to

act differently in different situations, trying to satisfy your mind by doing what you want in your dreams. When

your mind gets satisfied, you’re in a better position to concentrate more in your work. Since daydreaming activates

the nerves of your brain, you tend to have higher attentiveness and your ability to remember things develop.

When you daydream, you automatically imagine yourself as your heart says and therefore, you get to know

yourself better. You also start realizing the mistakes you’ve made in life and you start trying your best to avoid

repeating them. Such imagination techniques help you to connect yourself with your soul. 【写作指导】本篇文章比较容易理解，文章要点非常清晰，每段话都有自己的主题句。但是，在写作时，

学生应尽量少使用原文语句，而应融入自己积累的语法结构和词汇。同时，各个要点之间的衔接要合乎逻

辑。写作时要通篇考虑文章的开头和结尾，并且个要点之间要保持相对的性。 思路:

框架结构：总-分

文章要点：四段要点分别提取。如：waste our time and energy; your mood gets the right improvement...

同义替换：词汇 waste (v.)转换成 waste (n.) ; improvement (n.)转换成 improve (v.)... 结构衔接：各段之间是分别列出要点，属于并列关系，用衔接词 Firstly of all... What’s more...Last but not least...

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Have you ever wondered why some people seem to be so successful in life? Everything flows just right for them,

the great job, great salary, perfect love, and ideal life. One reason for success is the ability to make correct choices

and decisions that lead to positive outcomes. It’s based on power of understanding things immediately, without the

need for conscious reasoning or study. This ability is intuition (直觉) and highly successful people enjoy a higher

degree of intuition than the average person. Successful people combine all they have learned together with what

they sense with their intuition.

Everybody is intuitive, but not everybody trusts their intuition when it comes to making decisions. Most people

don’t even believe they have intuition, so, it doesn’t even cross their minds to use it for problem solving. Even

today, there are those who are afraid of their clairvoyant (有透视力的) ability. They have many misconcepti ons

about it, thinking it’s taboo. Others believe they have it, have had experiences with it, but never knew it could be a

valuable tool for problem solving.

Intuition is actually a skill that can be developed and applied effectively for improving all areas of life. It is not a

“gift” that only a few have. In fact, everyone has some degree of intuition. Your intuition has probably been a guiding force for you all of your life by having provided you with information that helps you reach positive outcomes. This type of information tends to come from ideas based on intuition, inspirational thoughts, dreams, or visions. It can, coincidentally, come from others, or from your inner voice. Often, it’s a very strong feeling deep in the pit (凹处) of your stomach or your heart. No matter how the information comes to you, when applied, the outcome is usually positive.

Intuition is like reading. It’s a skill that can be developed through time. No one is born knowing how to read; yet

almost everyone has the potential of learning how to read. As time went by, the more we read the more skillful we

became at reading. With intuition, the more you understand and use your intuition, the better it develops. Some

people seem to have more intuition than others. It’s probably because they had positive experiences with it as they

were growing up, and are now more comfortable with using it.

【写作指导】这篇文章为说明文，介绍关于 intuition 的一些知识。在分析文章结构时，了解每段讲什么非常

重要，抓住各段的中心词，并恰当的运用衔接词，保持与原文信息的一致性。在整理信息点的时候，要利

用好原文的有效信息，如过渡词 actually, 句型 the +比较级，the +比较级的使用；在合并两个信息点的时候，

如果能利用高中阶段语法就更好了。

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练习 3：

Cyberspace(网络空间) has given rise to a new social change where people make friends from across the world, but know little about their next-door neighbors. This worries critics (批评家). Take Bob for example. He thinks his

neighbor doesn’t know anything about gardening, but his net friend GreenThum does. Besides, Thum doesn’t do that annoying sound when he talks. Those people like Bob have long been

criticized for their lack of necessary social skills. Critics think people almost forget how to naturally communicate with their neighbors, creating a social network of strangers.

However, a report entitled “The Strength of Internet Ties” provides a different opinion. It suggests that the

Internet helps develop social networks and make use of them when it matters most. Friends often move. As kids, our friends’ parents move away. As adults, we move away to college or for work.

Communicative tools have made losing touch the result of laziness, not distance. “The larger and the more diverse （多样）a person’s network, the more important e-mail is,” argues Jeffrey Boase, who co-authored the report. “You can’t make phone calls or personal visits to all your friends very often, but you can keep in touch with them

regularly with the help of the Internet. That turns out to be very important.”

In addition to expanding and strengthening the social ties, people keep in the offline world, Internet and e-mail

provide a social and informational support group that helps people make difficult decisions and face challenges. “Internet use provides online users a path to resources, such as access to people who may have the right information to help deal with family health problems or find a new job,” says John Horrigan, author of the report. “The Internet creates a new basis for community. Rather than relying on a single community for social support, people often must actively seek out a variety of appropriate people and resources for different situations,” says co-author Barry Wellman.

【写作指导】本文是人们对网络虚拟空间交友不真实交往之间的不同看法展开，及个人看法。首先要确定

时态，宜用一般现在时。写作要点：（1）批评家认为，虚拟空间交友剥夺了人们必要的社交能力；（2）一

篇报道表明，因特网用户可以从中获益，它是一种工具而已；（3）个人认为，虚拟空间可以使因特网用户和朋友保持经常性联系；（4）个人认为，虚拟空间可以提供信息资源帮助人们解决困境。写作过程中注意

一些句式和短语的使用，如 suggest, be of benefit ,serve as a tool , stay in regular touch with,supply with,be

faced with 等。写作过程中注意一些连接词和过渡句使用，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，如 first, second, besides, in addition to this 等。

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练习 4：

Throughout history, music spread among people of different cultures. In today’s technological advanced society,

however, people spread music online, sometimes without an artist’s permission. This can lead to many problems,

and music companies are now dealing with this practice. Sharing music online without permission is theft(盗窃).

Sharing music online prevents recording companies from making money from their efforts. They say that sharing

music online has led to a huge drop in profits and sales over the past 10 years. People who find music for free

online are not paying for CDs or every MP3 downloaded. To truly understand the influence of music piracy(盗

版)on creators, one must understand how many people are involved in the recording process. For the sale of each

album, profits must be shared between musicians, sound engineers, music producers, managers, advertisers, and the

company selling the product. Many people believe sharing music only affects the recording artist, but the reality is

that sharing hurts business for all companies involved.

There are many people who don’t see the harm in sharing music online and even think they have the right to do it.

One online blogger states that her originally paid for an entire CD and that he should be able to do with the material

whatever he wants. While he may have legally paid for the music, he does not have the right to provide permission,

which means people like the blogger are thieves.

Although we don’t spread today’s music the same way we did before, there’s no doubt that people around the

world love to share music. However, internet piracy would prevent musicians from continuing producing albums

for fear of theft. Therefore, if people want to continue listening to their favorite artists, they need to buy their music

so that artists will make enough profit to continue their music careers.

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While many of us go to sleep before midnight, some teenagers choose to stay up much later. They are not driven by the burning desire to write a better essay or achieve a higher grade. Instead, they are busy playing online games. Known as young internet addicts, they have long been a problem in China. A report released in 2010 by the China Youth Association for Network Development showed that there were over 24 million young internet addicts among China’s young urban internet users. The report also said that over 18 million youth had a tendency to develop internet addiction.

To deal with the problem of internet addiction among teenagers, the Cyberspace

Administration of China released draft regulations in January which carried out a ban on online gaming. If the regulations are adopted, under-18s would be banned from playing online games between midnight and 8 am.

As soon as the government’s draft law surfaced, it drew great attention from the public. Some applauded the

law as a way to better protect minors（未成年人）, saying that too much overnight gaming is harmful to minors’

health and believing the period between midnight and 8 am to be vital to human physical functions. However,

others wondered whether it would be practicable if it came into effect, as minors could just borrow their parents’

IDs to register accounts to play online games. The Guangming Daily suggested that parents should help their

teenagers find a balance between the cyber world and the real world.

China is by no means the only one trying to fight against teenage gaming addiction. Germany introduced a

regulation in 2002 in an attempt to stop minors from playing online games from 10 pm to 6 am. Meanwhile, the UK,

the US and Australia have forceda rating system on computer games to make sure that teenagers cannot access

“adult” content such as violence, sex or bad language.

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1.Therefore ，it is common to try skin-lightening products.

2.Silence can occur in conversations.

3.There are various reasons for a difficult communication between parents and their teens. 4.Sugar is useful for our body ，but too much sugar does harm to our health ，which probably leads to health problems.

5.One effective way to grab your customer’s attention is with a knowledge use of color. 6.It seems that the only solution to the problem is that you concentrate your attention whatever noisy your

surroundings are.

7.Doctors recommend people not to put their health at risk but love and accept their natural colors. 8.School is advisable to fix the equipment at once. 9.School bullying has a strong bad effect。

10.Procrastination has a great influence on our wealth and health.

11. They think physical punishment is harmless and effective. 12.The new study shows a dependent relationship between them.

13.Compared with paper towels, hand dryers have more advantages, which will benefit school in four ways.

14.While physical beauty can be noticed quickly and easily, inner beauty is more important

15.The experiments shows that grapefruit juice benefits the loss of weight .

16.Wind power is environmental friendly, cost-effective, beneficial to the rural economy and can create many jobs. 17.“Life with father” played a significant role in a child’s progress of academics.

18.But besides success, failure should also be focused.

练习 1

Most people regard daydreaming as a waste of time and energy. (要点 1）However, that’s not the case. Many medical studies have found that daydreaming has a lot of benefits. First of all, daydreaming improve your mood. (要点 2）What’s more, it helps to develop your memory. (要点 3）Last but not least, daydreaming helps you to know yourself better. （要点4）

练习 2：

Intuition is the ability to make correct decisions that result in positive outcomes and a reason for success （要点 1）. Although all people are intuitive, not everyone can make good use oftheir intuition.（要点 2） Actually, it is a skill that can be developed and applied to improve your life. （要点 3）The more you practice it, the better it will develop. （要点4） 练习 3：

Some critics worry that cyberspace will rob the Internet users of necessary social skills.（要点 1）However, a report suggests that the Internet can be of benefit to social networks. （要点 2）It can serve as a tool to help people stay in regular touch with friends. （要点 3）Besides, it supplies people with social and informational resources when they are faced with difficult situations. （要点4） 练习 4：

In today’s society, it is theft to share music online. (要点 1) It hurts all relevant companies and people involved in the recording process. （要点 2）However, many people take no notice ofthe harm and even think sharing music online is their right, not knowing most music is copyrighted. （要点 3） Anyway, we need to protect musicians’ copyright so that they can continue producing albums for us to appreciate. （要点4） 练习 5：

Many teenagers in China have become addicted to overnight online games. (要点 1) Thus, the government released a draft law to solve the long-lasting issue. （要点 2）Some people welcomed the law because it is beneficial to the teenagers' health, while others doubted whether it would be effective. （要点 3） Actually, many other countries have also been making laws against the youth online addiction. （要点 4）