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Competition

社会热点类

P1

一、今昔对比:previously + current + 总结 二、总分总:

1.总体描写社会趋势 prevalent ,prevalence ,increasingly ,common 2.细节

3.总结

字数不够 参见语言包装

P2 口诀:TS+层次感(123)

一.TS 重要性和写法,还有经常在四六及中考到的TS种类(原因,危害,方法,途径,)

关于原因类的TS(仅供参考):

1. A multitude of factors, both individual and social,/from my perspective, could account for/contribute to the phenomenon of____ 或者干脆写 could account for this phenomenon.

2. The reasons for the phenomenon, which are obvious to all/both individual and social/from my perspective, can be listed as follows. 3. Considering every aspect of the issue, we may attribute the fact/phenomenon to the following factors.

4. A number of factors ,____, are responsible for decisions in choosing teachers.(新四级)

二.层次感:关联词

1.两点:

第一 On the one hand; on the other hand / 第二For one thing; for another thing 2. 三点:

第一 First and foremost / initially;

第二 In addition / Additionally / Besides / Furthermore / Moreover /

第三 last but not least / finally 灵活处理的:To begin with;

What also plays an indispensable role is ______也可以写为Another contributory factor is_____.

三.写长的5大方式

1.因果

2.In other words

3.举例 万能废话:There are abundant examples to prove the view. 4.定语从句

5. 正反论证 In contrast/On the contrary 如果是先好后坏 Regrettably 6.If/although 7. 套句

First and foremost, one’s appearance plays an extraordinarily vital role in an interview. A job hunter, dressing himself properly, looks mature and confident, which is a good first impression to the interviewer. On the contrary, improper dressing would only results in negative impression./ the manager would have a negative impression on condition that one dresses himself in a strange way./ the interviewee is not likely to win the job provided that he fails to attach importance to his appearance.

四.总结(不一定需要)

Under such circumstances,____________________________.

P3 看法、建议

一、我的观点 / 看法 / 选择

我们perspective + why原因(1,2,3) 二、建议 advise suggestions 对策 [总分总]

1.总 It's imperative for sb to......... 2.分 for one thing.....For another thing

自己 (obligation) it's our obligation to...... 他人 社会 法律 教育 3.总(可有可无)

I am convinced that only by taking effective and efficient measures can we survive and thrive

总:

1.On on account can we turn a blind eye to this controversial issue. 2.It is imperative / sensible / urgent for us to take this issue into consideration.

分:

1.自己如何做:It is our obligation to.....

We should spare no efforts to...... 不遗余力 I intend / propose to 计划 2.呼吁: appeal to sb to.....

立法:proper laws and regulations should be worked act and effected to

3.教育:we should educate & enlighten the awareness of people that.. 4.媒体: mass media 大众传媒 play an irreplaceable role in

总:

一.好:我的观点加原因

The analysis we have made points to an unshakable conclusion that _______ + 原因.

Taking into account the above factors, we can safely draw a conclusion that_______ + 原因.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that _____ + 原因.

还可以加一句总结:_________________________________________________________.

二.坏:解决问题

1.TS 灵活运用的实例:

The analysis we have made points to an unshakable conclusion that considerable importance should be attached to the issue. 2.两点建议

3.总结

三.影响/好处或问题(双刃剑 double-edged sword)

1.两好,当然也可以只写一好,考虑到字数和层次,建议写两点 2.两坏,(那么这个一定是个坏事,不如考解决问题的建议) 3.一好一坏

1) Obviously, there is both positive and negative sides of XXX. On the one hand, it is beneficial in that„..On the other hand, it is harmful, for„.

2) Obviously, there is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of this matter. On the one hand, students are treated better than before. On the other hand, some top teachers will be ignored, if they are not able to please the market. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that further attention will be paid to this matter.

P3经典总结:And I cling to an unshakable belief that_____________.

Only in this way / by doing sth / if + 句子 can sb + 谓语

EX:Only by continuously improving ourselves can we demonstrate grace under pressure 在压力中沧海横流,方显英雄本色

图表类

P1 描述图表 P2 why

P3 提纲(同社会热点类)

一、数据语言

1、种类 line chart 线状图 Bar chart 柱状图

Pie chart 饼状图 account for 占据 Table 数据表

2、表示“上升”

 慢速上升: increase slowly / steadily ascend / rise (rose)  剧增: increase sharply scar 猛增 3、表示“下降”

decrease / fall / decline

4、数据 2 ~ 10 increase from 2 to 10 Increase by 8 2 ~ 4 doubled

2 ~ 6 the number tripled 5、时间 91到00年

Over the past ten~year time span from 91 to 00 6、占据份额

Take up / account for

二、P1写法

1、总体描写社会趋势

The past XX-year time span from 199X to 2000 witness / experienced a dramatic increase / decrease / changes 2、分写具体变化  顺承 besides

 转折 on the contrary

如图所示 as is illustrated / shown in the 图

书信类

1、开门见山说意图

What am I going to do / who am I 2、咨询建议一二三

中间二三段 TS + 1,2,3 层次清晰 (见社会热点类) 3、不同内容可分段

4、感谢客气不可少 grateful

5、期待回信成惯例 (辞职信、公开信不可用)

格式: 顶头写 段于段之间空一行

称呼: 私人:dear sb / 公文:dear (president) 职位 Dear sir / madam / to whom it may concern 正文

Your sincerely (落款 全部顶格写) Your name

P2

I'm writting this letter to do sth

For the purpose of doing To inform you that because

I would be grateful if you would take my suggestions / ideas / the following contents into consideration / account

八字凑字数法: 前因后果, 虚拟自身

P3

1、感谢看信

(1)I am indebted to you for your attention to my letter (2)I appreciate your attention to my letter

(3)I would like to express my gratitude to you for your attention to my letter

2、诸多不便打扰了

Let me apologize for my any inconveniences I may have cause 3、请速回信

I shall feel obliged by a reply at your tallist convenience

4、留下联系方式

Please feel free to contract for more information

对比观点选择类 四段式

P1:(2句)1.热点话题

2.强调人们观点不一 no concensus P2:正面 hold positive view say / claim

P3:反面 hold opposite view maintain / argue P4:我的观点、想法

语言包装1:四大从句的修饰

1.因果从句:

 + 名词 because of = due to = owing to = on account of +N EX: You will sail through the CET6 ~ your persistence

 + 句 because = as = since = in that = for the reason that +句子

2.条件状语从句:

 如果 If = on condition that

EX: ~ you attach great importance to (pay attention to)  只要 as \\ so long as

 倒装 only by doing......can you do.......

3.让步状语从句:

 尽管 although + 句子 = in spite of + 词 = despite + 词 = despite the fact that +句子

EX: despite the beauties... Only you can fascinate me Fascinated by / with  即使 even if , even though

4.表达“我相信”:

I believe that..... = I cling to a belief that...... = I am convinced that

语言包装2:表达好与坏

一.坏

1. Bring about a negative / adverse / unfavorable consequence on sb./ sth.

2. Pose a potential and probable threat on / to.... (PPPT)

3. Put an enormous pressure upon / on sth. 4. Adversely affect (AA)

二.好

1.Bring about a positive / beneficial / far-reaching / favorable influence / impact on...

2.lay a solid foundation for sth. 打下坚实基础 3.play a irreplaceable role in sth.

语言包装3:解决问题

1.解决:address / tackle / dispose of + problem / issue

2.解决问题: reverse the disturbing trend 扭转令人不安的趋势  crack the hard nut

3.Adj. Alarming / grave / delicate 棘手的

语言包装4:短句拉长原则

1.并列句:A + B = C

A ,and B (一定要有逗号)

2.套句: “大家都知道”(self-evident),2~3句每句8词 3.非定语从句: .............,which + 结果 (好三坏四) (far-reaching , PPPT)

4.动词V1,V2并列, not only...,but also......

5.举例细节 such as / including ranging from A to B to ....... 6.合并同类项 (蓝书P17) 7.插入语(表示限定性)

 both individual and social

 to some extent 在某种程度上(主谓之间)  to a large extent 很大程度上

In all works of life 在各行各业之中

表达“多”:a great number(C) / deal(U) / mass(万能) of a variety of a wide range of knowledge Various of

6级写作常见错误

一、龙飞凤舞笔迹乱

考研 20分 平均10分

6级 百分制 作文15分占7~8分

字迹:矮胖型 ,不要斜,不要连,平时要练 涂改在10%以内 从左下角到右上角 字数:控制在150~170之内 二、真情流露没必要 不得使用惊叹号 见P48 三、滔滔不绝意识流 提出问题 分析问题 解决问题 四、表达不出真难受

EX:“孝敬父母” 换思维 :对父母好,照顾父母

It's our obligation to take care of our aging parents. “取其精华,去其糟粕”

To absorb the positive aspects and abandon the negative sides. 招生 enroll 乱收费 = 无理由乱收费 unreasonable 五、语言单调没变化 (不要连续出现)

“七宗罪” 能换则换

1、more and more a. adj people in ever expandingly numbers b. adv increasingly 2、opinion

 From my perspective  Based on what I know 3、very ,pretty

= extraordinarily = extremely = undoubtedly = undeniably 4、important

= vital = crucial = essential(本身为最高级)= irreplaceable → play a XXX role in 5&6、好、坏

positive & negative

Lottery undeniably bring about a ________ on society.

好 (influence) 的adj:positive ,beneficial ,favorable ,far-reaching

坏(consequence)的adv:negative , adverse , unfavorable 7、带来

Bring about , give rise to , result in , contribute to

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